Feedback from my teacher

I showed my teacher (Mr.Gallop) my music magazine today. I showed him all the research and planning I had put into the magazine. He suggested moving the picture on the font cover up into the middle of the page. I tried this out and showed friends and family to see if they preferred the picture at the bottom of the page or the middle of the page. Most of them chose the picture to be at the bottom of the page so I decided to go with my audience's opinion. I did take Mr.Gallop's advise onboard though, instead of filling in some empty space with the picture, I used colourful subtitles instead. We both agreed that this looked a lot better than it did.

Some advise he gave me on my double page spread was the space next to the picture made both pages look a bit odd. I knew what he meant as I could see the dead space as well. We came up with a few ideas on how to fill in the space. They were to take a new picture, add some text into it or to make the picture bigger. I wanted to change the picture as I believe this was the best solution. I liked the effect of the band walking away from the camera so I didn't want to change that. Instead, I went through the pictures I took that day and found one where the picture has the same effect but makes the picture stand out more.
                                                            
This is the picture I am thinking of changing the picture to. It looks   similar but I believe the band doesn't blend into the background as much as the other one did.